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I hear you say you love me
and I cry.

I envy you, oh how I envy you...
How you flick your tongue,
And effortlessly break through all of my barriers.
Each word a drop of bitter sweet ecstasy
Running down my face, through my hair
As I fall deeper into your spell.

You weave a waterfall with your words,
I'm leisurely drowning in your love.
The icy cage around my heart is melting.
Cold and fragile though it may be
I still long to give it to you.

The one thing that I wish for,
More than anything in this cruel world.
Is to be able to tell you how I feel,
For you to hear "I Love you" from my own lips.

I hear you say you love me
and I cry,

Because all I can do is write "I Love you", back
And hope that it will be enough...
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This is a piece inspired by a story that i'm working on at the moment.

The girl writing this was born mute and never thought anything of it until she met the person who changed her life.
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:iconnyasha24:
!nyasha24 Feb 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
very heart felt and a little sad. well done
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~Khiri-543 Feb 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~
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!nyasha24 Feb 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
np :D
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*VeronicaIsabel Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfeaturedplz:
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~Khiri-543 Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyou so much!
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*VeronicaIsabel Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
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:iconnohimase:
wow. it reminds me of one of my characters. really good.
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~Khiri-543 May 31, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! So whos your character, is she mute?
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:iconnohimase:
No. Actually that's another character in the book lol. But the the one who "flicks his tongue" and charms her is the main male character that your poem reminds me of.
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~RoyMustangIZLIFE May 31, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:') So beautiful! I hope to see your story in bookstores soon...It's a brilliant idea, and definitely deservant of being published. Amazing poem, amazing idea: overall, excellent. :)
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