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She's hiding
in the corner again,
just like when she was little.

She thinks that if
she turns her back
on the world,
that it won't be able
to see her tears.

That maybe,
no one will hear
her scream.

But, her corner
isn't as secluded
as she might want.

Everyone has
their own haven,
and there are only
so many places
to hide.

Sooner or later,
you run into someone.

Someone who is running
from the same things you are,
in the same direction,
to the same place.

It's not fate,
or destiny,
just the world
coming together
in all the right ways.

Two lonely jigsaw pieces, sliding into place.

The pieces coming together
are one thing,
but pulling them apart
is nearly impossible.

Some things are just meant to be,
for better and worse.
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iluvcookies001 Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
this reminds me of this girl you useto love........
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sillycanadianwriter Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Hmm. That happened to me yesterday. [link]
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Daft-Enigma Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love you for writing this.

Brilliant!
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:iconkhiri-543:
Khiri-543 Featured By Owner May 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ^^''
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:iconkimmy-of-the-darkk:
Kimmy-of-the-Darkk Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for giving me something to
light up the gloom of melancholy,
Curled up, curled down, now I'll look over my shoulder
for the other-broken one,
who'll help me save the world.

The bells are ringing, singing.
Softly, I'll look over my shoulder again, this time at you-who-I-don't-really-know.
'Thank you.'
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:iconkhiri-543:
Khiri-543 Featured By Owner May 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
O.o did you just write that?
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:iconkimmy-of-the-darkk:
Kimmy-of-the-Darkk Featured By Owner May 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
^^; Yup, that started out as a more normal comment, and ended up a poem.
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:iconkhiri-543:
Khiri-543 Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well i'm glad it did ;)
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:iconkimmy-of-the-darkk:
Kimmy-of-the-Darkk Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D So glad you liked it!
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angelichope Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011
I think it's beautiful and sweet, and I like the meaning of it!:) Lovely!:heart:
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:iconkhiri-543:
Khiri-543 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~ :D
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angelichope Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
My pleasure!:heart:
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:icondeerhunter908:
deerhunter908 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Student General Artist
This is so amazing! I can't think of a better way to put something together that says the same message~
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:iconkhiri-543:
Khiri-543 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~!!
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:icondeerhunter908:
deerhunter908 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Student General Artist
No problem, keep at it! ^_^
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AirieX Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011
awwwwwww. it's very sweet and very well-written.
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:iconkhiri-543:
Khiri-543 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyouuu :hug:
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nyasha24 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
interesting piece. i like the way you how two people meet because they are running from the same thing and hiding in the same place.
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:iconkhiri-543:
Khiri-543 Featured By Owner May 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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nyasha24 Featured By Owner May 5, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
most welcome :D
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zinkai1 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011
Beautiful
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:iconkhiri-543:
Khiri-543 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~
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zinkai1 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011
you're welcome ^_^
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SnowFlake197 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I love this~! <3
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:iconkhiri-543:
Khiri-543 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~! <3
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SnowFlake197 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome <3
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CaeTroiPhotography Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh, I like it very much :)
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:iconkhiri-543:
Khiri-543 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyou~
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CaeTroiPhotography Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome :hug:
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NuClEaR-JiNx Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is very good : ) Xx
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:iconkhiri-543:
Khiri-543 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~
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NuClEaR-JiNx Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem~ Xx
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